Surprisingly, this was a short chapter but it took me a week to write. Yes, it had a bit of a battle scene in it and anyone who knows me, knows I hate writing them.

I wrote it then edited it, then tried to make it active instead of passive. I think I did OK. Sounded good to me but it’s the first draft and I guess we can liven it up a bit if need be in the rewrite/edit.

The good news is - I finished my chapters and have emailed them to Ali, which means I can now return to my novel. Yay!

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